Wednesday, August 25, 2010

In a soggy world...




A faint, solemn whisper,
Discarded and deprived.
Of the air that used to give it life,
That little voice inside.


A battered and bruised belief,
An ambiance of still.
What chance has the incredible?
When the logic world finds it's kill.


And as the hours fail me,
And though my hopes do try,
My dreams unfold and scatter,
like teardrops in the sky.


My arrogance or confidence,
Is sparingly the same,
Why not invest in vanity?
whilst I'm still sane.



To hell with all the misanthropists,
The cynic, placid minds.
My Cause is simple,
A worthy audience it shall soon find.
It's easy,
On criticism I'll put a ban.
and if I do then maybe,
I'll earn myself a fan.


For looking at the glass half empty,
Is like staring into the abyss.
Looking for rainbow monkeys,
The gruesome hoplessness I shan't miss.









4 comments:

  1. "To hell with all the misanthropists,
    The cynic, placid minds.
    My Cause is simple,
    A worthy audience it shall soon find.
    "It's easy
    On criticism I'll put a ban
    and if I do then maybe,
    I'll earn myself a fan."

    Well said!! wish I could do the same..people are really annoying, all they do is decrease yourself worth :C except ur best friends of course..

    I like this too"For looking at the glass half empty,
    Is like staring into the abyss."

    and the-hours-fail-me part..


    YOU KNOW WHAT, I REALLY LIKE IT ..THE WHOLE THING!! GOOD JOB ;);)
    waiting for more <3

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  2. You definitely deserve an audience!
    It's so good. Short on words to say.
    Your words are striking and definitely more than I expected.

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  3. The Know-it-all has awarded you the ‘One Lovely Blog’ Award! Details here: http://theknow-it-all.blogspot.com/2010/09/yay-award-one-lovely-blog-award.html Congrats! ~The Know-it-all ;D

    Sorry it was late :P i kinda sent it out to random ppl, just wanted to fill up the 15

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  4. someone you know very wellSeptember 28, 2010 at 1:23 PM

    I LIKE IT !!, I really do well written best I ve read of writings so far but you see my points there are two faces to a writing , the idea and and the style. This one is the most balanced solid idea and a nice style

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